Wednesday, September 26, 2007

Practice News Story 4: Court

Subject: Practice News Story 4: Court
Posted: Sept. 26, 2007
Headline: Two Accused In Church Break-In
Dateline:
Logan,UT- A 35 year-old man and a juvenile were arrested on accusations of vandalism and breaking an enter y. 35 year-old James Michaels and the juvenile was arrested in his home last Wednesday night authorities used k-9 units to follow a trail to their home. The two have since posted bail for $500 dollars each.
Late Wednesday morning the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints was broken into early in the morning around 2am-4am. The break in was discovered at around 6am and the authorities were contacted. Defense attorney Bobbie Cochran has set a trail date for October 21, 2007. Plea agreements have been discussed, according to Defense attorney Cochran.
According to District Attorney Noel Mayfield, the charges may cost James Michael 6 months to 1 year in prison and a $5,000 fine. No other suspects are being investigated in the case.

2 comments:

Danny said...

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Madison Hintze said...

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