Friday, September 26, 2008

Draft Press Release 3: Cause Promotion

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE:
Sept. 26, 2008
Preston Parker
founder/president
cachevaia@gmail.com
www.cvaia.com

Cache valley Residents Recieve Financial Advice

LOGAN,Ut.—Preston Parker, founder and president of the Cache Valley Area Investors Association, is sharing his financial philosophies to help cache valley residents attain financial independence. This association, which was founded in July 2007, is aimed to educate people about smart spending by educating on topics such as investing, money management, and financial opportunites.
When asked why this association was started, Parker stated, “ I was tired of people telling me that they do not like their jobs . Now I invite them to come to our meetings to find out how they can work at a job that they love and be finnancially independent in a short amount of time.”

Attendees of the meetings range from 18-70 years old. Parker encourages all to attend his meetings and said, “Becoming financially independent allows you to do what you love.”

People in America have aample opportunity and options to be a ble to work ina job they enjoy. Understanding and managing passive income makes this possible. There are many associations which are helping educate people in how to truly become financially independent. Cahce Valley Investors Assocaition based in Logan, Utah, is one such organization.
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6 comments:

mckell said...

I liked your press release. Usually your headline should be in all caps and sub headline after that but your content was great!

Max K. Young said...

Hey man good job, i agree with the headline, but other than that not bad

Han Feng said...
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Han Feng said...

Sorry, I accidently deleted my comment.

You did a very good job.

I would say that there are few AP Style problems that you may want to check. e.g. If I remember correctly, we never abbreviate Utah in dateline and in text.

Excellent work!

Jo Olsen said...

Hey Jason, nice work. Just remember to put either Preston's or your information at the end of the press release.

npeters said...

Hey Jason, I would say your press release just has AP errors in it, but I understand that's mostly because it is only a rough draft, but make sure you go through and fix those. Remember to capitalize the c and v in Cache Valley, and also, remember to have a headline in all caps, and a sub headline underneath. Make sure you add some more info on what CVAIA actually does to, so it's not confusing.